Friday, November 29, 2019

Cyclic Mini-Story



A story that ends in the same place it began is commonly called a circular or cyclical narrative.
Circular narratives cycle through the story one event at a time to end back where the story originated.

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“Truth or Dare !!” asked Adi’s friend
“Dare” replied Adi with confidence.
“Hmmmm… Ok… Go up to that beautiful girl, propose her with a kiss at the end” laughed his friend.
Adi gave a thought. “Ok Done”
“Give me a minute to compose myself before I move forward,” Adi said taking a deep breath with closed eyes.
Adi stood up with confidence.
He began to walk towards the girl; adjusting his hairstyle in heroic style.
Having a dude-look with his aviators on; carrying his cute signature smile.
“Hi…” Adi keeping his hand forward to the girl.
“Ahhh... Hi…” Girl hesitantly shakes hand with Adi.
“I am Adi” continued with a smile.
“okaaaayy… I am Chabbi” girl replied in confusion.
Adi kneeled down and held her hands with grace.
“You are the most beautiful woman on earth; seems like an angel flew down from heaven. I believe it's our destiny to meet and live together.”
“Trust me, I may be some random stranger right now, but I will prove myself to be your true heart and pure soul later on and will be forever for you.”
“It's not Love-At-First-Sight but its Relation-At-First-Sight-Till-Eternity.”
“Truly said by God; People meet on earth destined in heaven”
Saying this, Adi stood up holding her hands
Chabbi was still amazed and perplexed.
“I Love you” Adi proposed moving forward to kiss her
“Oh.. Hellooo…. Oh… Helloooo…” shrugged his friend.
“Where are you mister?” friend laughed at Adi.
“Truth or Dare” mocked his friend for Adi’s dream.
“Dare” replied Adi realizing his imagination of love proposal confidence.

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“Lord, Please bless me with prosperity, health, and happiness in business as well as at home” Adi prayed with all his heart at a temple
“I promise, I will come every day to worship you here at the temple once I get back on life and stay steady” Adi continued his prayer.
He offered flowers and prasad to The Lord.
Keeping faith that Lord will make everything back on track - business and familywise; he completed his prayer and left for home.
Adi began to focus on business slowly and steadily.
He began to keep a healthy relationship at home and at work.
20 months later,
Adi was back on business success and having a happy home atmosphere.
He was feeling so satisfied and pride for himself.
Chabbi reminded Adi “Listen, now that your business is settled now and we all are happy at home; as promised, you should begin to worship The Lord every day at the temple and offer flowers and prasad”
“What!!!! Lord did nothing. He left me with nothing. I myself took charge of myself. I became positive, kept focus and work harder than before. This all is a result of me and credit should go only to me” shrugged Adi in anger.
Chabbi couldn’t say much in front of Adi’s anger. She was numb.
10 months later,
Adi began to face financial crisis, his business was running in loss, more fights, arguments, and disagreement in the home.
Adi was depressed.
Adi gave everything to revive his business and family but couldn’t do much.
“Lord, Please bless me with prosperity, health, and happiness in business as well as at home” Adi prayed with all his heart at a temple
“I promise, I will come every day to worship you here at the temple once I get back on life and stay steady” Adi continued his prayer.
He offered flowers and prasad to The Lord.

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